http://harvardapplication.com/can-anyone-help-me-rework-a-sentence-of-an-objective-essay-for-a-harvard-medical-program-application.htm Fri, 18 May 2012 19:04:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 http://harvardapplication.com/can-anyone-help-me-rework-a-sentence-of-an-objective-essay-for-a-harvard-medical-program-application.htm/comment-page-1#comment-959 psy1on1 Sun, 05 Sep 2010 14:43:39 +0000 http://harvardapplication.com/can-anyone-help-me-rework-a-sentence-of-an-objective-essay-for-a-harvard-medical-program-application.htm#comment-959 You could try, "On a personal note, not only did medical research help to improve the quality of my mother's life, but medical technology actually saved my father's life". Or, "On a personal note, I'd like to mention that medical research help to improve the quality of my mother's life by....(mention how), and medical technology actually saved my father's life by... (mention how). I hope that this has helped you in some way, and Good Luck with your future career. You could try, "On a personal note, not only did medical research help to improve the quality of my mother’s life, but medical technology actually saved my father’s life". Or, "On a personal note, I’d like to mention that medical research help to improve the quality of my mother’s life by….(mention how), and medical technology actually saved my father’s life by… (mention how). I hope that this has helped you in some way, and Good Luck with your future career.

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Good luck with your application im sure you will make a fantastic contribution in the field

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